“神舟瀟灑有天驕，科研碩果領風騷”，2022年6月5日10時44分，中國神舟十四號載人飛船發射成功。那時，你和你的同學在做什么？“英姿颯爽掛銀袍，慷慨出征星漢遙”，由三位航天英雄的偉大壯舉，你想到了什么？“黑發不知勤學早，白發方悔讀書遲”，為實現“中國夢”而貢獻自己一份力量，你打算做些什么？

　　要求：

　　1. 短文內容應包括以上要點，可做適量拓展；

　　2. 書寫工整、語句通順、句意連貫、字數 80詞左右。

　　參考詞匯：英雄 hero   對……感到驕傲  take pride of（be proud of）

　　On June 5, Shenzhou 14 manned spacecraft was launched at Jiuquan Satellite Launch Center on time. ____________________________________

　　范文：

　　On June 5, Shenzhou 14 manned spacecraft was launched at Jiuquan Satellite Launch Center on time. I thought the three astronauts were heroes of our country. I was proud of them, because they were not afraid of death for our country. However, my friends and I were watching TV and playing cards. At the same time, I thought of what I did badly before. I was lazier than any other student in our class in the study. I was good at playing video games. I was not friendly to my classmates, I fought with them five times. I was very ashamed for this.

　　 I think I should learn from the astronauts. I will try my best to study hard. I will ask my teachers and the top students for help. I will get on well with my classmates. I will also help my teachers, students and family. I will only spend one hours playing video games on the weekend.

　　【詳解】

　　1.題干解讀：該題目是材料類書面表達，根據提示內容，結合自身實際，談一談自己的感想和計劃，可適當拓展。

　　2.寫作指導：該題目主要使用第一人稱，時態以一般過去時和一般將來時為主；第一段寫中國神舟十四號載人飛船發射成功時，自己和同學在做什么，以及由此引發的感想；第二段寫向航天英雄學習，并寫出自己的計劃。保證內容完整，行文連貫，做到無單詞拼寫錯誤和語法使用錯誤。

 

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